This post looks at the rough cut we put together, the notes on what we would like to improve along with the audience feedback we received.
ROUGH CUT
Things to improve on:
- Length of titles vary too much
- Audio bridge too long and enters too early
- Game audio in scene 1 too quiet
- Main title too simple
- Music shouldn't go over full opening
- need to rerecord some foley sound
- the wind in the outside scene breaks the verisimilitude
- remove the car scene at the end
- remove some shots
- shorten it
- be more consistent with titles
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